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From: Neil Cuzon <58763315+NeilCuzon@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 28 Feb 2022 00:01:03 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Update README.md

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@@ -18,10 +18,9 @@ Mermaid is a Javascript based diagramming and charting tool that uses Markdown-i
 > Doc-Rot is a Catch-22 that Mermaid helps to solve.
 
 Diagramming and documentation costs precious developer time and gets outdated quickly.
-But not having diagrams or docs ruins productivity and hurts organizational learning. <br/>
-Mermaid addresses this problem by cutting the time, effort and tooling that is required to create modifiable diagrams and charts, for smarter and more reusable content.
-The text definitions for Mermaid diagrams allows for it to be updated easily, it can also be made part of production scripts (and other pieces of code).
-So less time needs to be spent on documenting, as a separate and laborious task. <br/>
+But not having diagrams or docs ruins productivity and hurts organizational learning.<br/>
+Mermaid addresses this problem by enabling users to create easily modifiable diagrams, it can also be made part of production scripts (and other pieces of code).<br/>
+So less time is spent on documenting as a separate task. <br/>
 Even non-programmers can create diagrams through the [Mermaid Live Editor](https://mermaid-js.github.io/mermaid-live-editor/).<br/>
 [Tutorials](./docs/Tutorials.md) has video tutorials.
 Use Mermaid with your favorite applications, check out the list of [Integrations and Usages of Mermaid](./docs/integrations.md).
@@ -34,7 +33,7 @@ For a more detailed introduction to Mermaid and some of its more basic uses, loo
 
 ## Examples
 
-__The following are some examples of the diagrams, charts and graphs that can be made using Mermaid and the Markdown-inspired text specific to it. Click here jump into the [text syntax](https://mermaid-js.github.io/mermaid/#/n00b-syntaxReference).__
+__The following are some examples of the diagrams, charts and graphs that can be made using Mermaid. Click here jump into the [text syntax](https://mermaid-js.github.io/mermaid/#/n00b-syntaxReference).__
 <!-- <Flowchart> -->
 
 ## Flowchart [<a href="https://mermaid-js.github.io/mermaid/#/flowchart">docs</a> - <a href="https://mermaidjs.github.io/mermaid-live-editor/#/edit/eyJjb2RlIjoiZ3JhcGggVERcbiAgICBBW0hhcmRdIC0tPnxUZXh0fCBCKFJvdW5kKVxuICAgIEIgLS0-IEN7RGVjaXNpb259XG4gICAgQyAtLT58T25lfCBEW1Jlc3VsdCAxXVxuICAgIEMgLS0-fFR3b3wgRVtSZXN1bHQgMl0iLCJtZXJtYWlkIjp7InRoZW1lIjoiZGVmYXVsdCJ9fQ">live editor</a>]
@@ -248,4 +247,4 @@ A quick note from Knut Sveidqvist:
 
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-*Mermaid was created by Knut Sveidqvist for easier documentation.*
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+*Mermaid was created by Knut Sveidqvist for easier documentation.*